Tuesday, September 30, 2014

The War

The War

The War, Directed by Jon Avnet, portrays several underlying themes and extended metaphors. The father, Stephen Simmons, returns home from the Vietnam War with intentions to rebuild his life with his family, but is also fighting a challenge of his own, post-traumatic stress. The father wants to be a role model for his children, and teaches them that love is the only thing worth fighting for; “the only thing that keeps people truly safe and happy is love.” (Stephen) The film displays the reality of post- traumatic stress, and presents an important life lesson on picking the right battles to fight.

Post-traumatic stress is no fake mental health condition.  This film shows the severity of PTS and how hard it is to return to a “normal life” after experiencing one or more terrifying events.  Stephen often dreams about his time in the Vietnam War and can never stop thinking about how he left his friend to die.  Stephen feels like he has to make up for his wrongs by being the best dad he can be.  “They’re gonna make a difference in the world… that means I made a difference.” (Stephen)  This quote shows that the only way Stephen can recover from PTS is make sure that his children think they can accomplish anything.  Only then he will feel like he has done something meaningful to his life.      

Happiness and peace is found by choosing the best way to go about an issue.  The film relates the conflicts from the Vietnam War to the current conflicts of the feud between the Simmon’s and the Lipnicki's.  Stephen’s son, Stu, is constantly getting into fights with this other group of kids.  Stu eventually learns to put his emotions towards the greater good, after he learns from his and his father’s experiences of war.  “War is like a big machine that no one really knows how to run and when it gets out of control it ends up destroying the things you thought you were fighting for, and lot of other things you kinda forgot you had.” (Lidia)  A good example of this was when the two groups were fighting over the tree house.  In the end, the tree house is destroyed, and during the battle, Stu sees the pointless fighting all around him.  He realizes that his mind was clouded with ignorance and anger after his father’s death.  He then looks to the most important issue at hand, saving Billy from drowning in the water tower.  Overall, Stu showed an act of courage by saving Billy and earned the respect of the Lipnicki’s.  Just like his father did in that cave, Stu risked his life to save another. 

The lesson learned is to look past the battle at hand, and strive for the solution that is beneficial for all.  Stephen could never forgive himself for leaving his fellow solider in the war, but redeemed himself by saving his friends life in the cave.  Stephen was able to die at peace, now knowing that he did his job as an outstanding figure for his family.  Stu experienced a death of a loved one, but was able to overcome his troubles in a positive way.  Stu finally understands that fighting is useless in the absence of love.  The one thing you can take away from this film is that it only, “takes a split second for you to do something you’ll regret the whole rest of your life.” (Stephen)   








Monday, September 22, 2014

One Strong Child



          I have read half way through my memoir, A long Way Gone. The suspense and dangers that main character has experienced so far is unbelievable.  It showed a whole new perspective of how life is different than living in a calm, white, suburban area in Louisville, Colorado.  life is easy here, even though sometimes it feels like the world is crashing down on us.  It's hard to grow up in a third world country trying to survive for your life every day.  Being a 12 year old and experiencing dead bodies, blood, and decapitated heads is no way to grow up.  Many children are forced to be child soldiers or killed if they don't join.  "Visualize the enemy, the rebels who killed your parents, your family, and those who are responsible for everything that has happened to you," is engraved into every child soldier's mind to make them kill without mercy.  I am excited to finish this book and get the full conclusion of the story.     


         My college essay has been coming along.  I have redone the first and second paragraphs and editing the other three.  I really focused on making the essay at least 75 percent reflective and only 25 percent summarizing my story.  It was hard to shorten a story to a concise format, but I left in the most important points.  I used many similes, like, "I felt like I was on an assembly line being conducted to do some unimportant job by a higher up," to convey my story in a stronger way.  I also used many metaphors, like, "my heart beat through my chest," to really give the reader clear image of whats happening.  I had both my parents proof read it to fix stupid spelling and grammar errors, but other than that they said it was well crafted.  This essay will be a knock out of the park once it's finished.



Monday, September 15, 2014

Life on a Swivel

     The more life experiences one person haves, the more they understand the world around them.  Life could not exist without the world and vise versa.  Traveling to mexico and seeing how different the culture was than here in the US made me see the world in a different perspective.  The more somone travels, the more someone considers the world around them.  Even traveling around the US gives a valuable life experience that gives meaning to life.  My dad has been to many different parts of the world and he told me that he learned more in that two year period than he has in twelve years of school. Knowing whats going on around you is one of the most important things to be aware of.  Keep your head on swivel to excel to the top and not fall behind.

    

College Essay


           I have never been more stumped in my life to write one sentence for my college essay.  My mind just goes into a straight oblivion.  I have a strong topic to use, about the fist time I cared for patient while ski patrolling, but my paper is still white as gets.  I just don’t believe that I’m a senior and I’m already writing my college essay!  Freshmen year seemed like it was yesterday.  Although high school has helped me manage my time better and become a much more social person, College will be a whole different story socially, academically, and athletically.  It's a bittersweet feeling I have towards college. I'm bitter about my college essay, but I'm excited to get out of the house. 


            I’m looking forward to taking this class though, because it will strongly help me prepare for the college life.  I have never really annotated before in previous years of high school.  Teachers have never really explained what annotating is, being in not advanced LA for the last 4 years.  Is annotating only used in advanced LA?  I plan on going to college, and I’ve heard that annotating is one of the main skills to success.  A night’s homework could be annotating 100 pages from a textbook.  I'm glad that we reviewed the basics of annotating this week and I hope master this skill by the end of the year. SLCC will push anyone in the right direction towards a better reading comprehension, writing ability, and communication skills.








Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Memoir


I am very excited to start exploring and learning about memoirs for the next month or so.  I learned that a memoir is quite different than an autobiography, in that a memoir is more about a specific or random collection of memories/stories, rather than the Authors life from beginning to end.  Memoirs are full of heartfelt and unique stories that you can relate to in one way or anther.  It puts you in someone else’s shoe and you can see a different perspective on life.  A Long Way Gone, by Ishmael Beah, really caught my eye because I wanted to see what its like to be a child soldier in a third world country.  Other memoirs that I found interesting was the one about the complete backwards family and the one about how I guy kidnapped a girl for her whole teenage life.  I look forward to reading my memoir and hearing the deep stories of other student’s memoirs. 


Six word memoirs are my favorite.  They are short, complex, meaningful, and can show a life’s story in only 6 words.  They range from sad ones to funny ones to any other emotion there is.  Six word memoirs may seem easy to make, but sometimes it takes years to find that perfect combination of words.  There is no fluff or irrelevant stories in six word memoirs, only the truth.  I also really enjoyed the slam poetry video called I’m Taking My Ball and Going Home, by Scott.  The way he projected his voice and used his body language made it seem like you were watching a movie.  The story was also very rich in detail when he described the fat kid in the back of class that only wanted to be heard.  Slam poetry really grabs the viewers attention and doesn’t let it go till the end.  I would love to go watch one live to compare the difference of seeing them in person rather than over the computer.

I count my riches in powder